Question 1 - please make sure your answers are easy to read. I love the interesting graphics that add to each slide but the writing needs to be bigger and in a for different to the background to make it easy to read. Thanks!
only partially answered. Although you speak about the conventions you used, you didn't answer the second part of this which is whether your film challenged or used thriller conventions.
- A bit more depth is needed in talking about the love and romance aspect of what was represented. What messages are your film sending to the viewer about love and relationships? What does Liv and Dylan's relationship say to us about marriage and love?
- I feel like you could have commented on gender roles in this film too as it flips things around a bit. In a society where usually domestic violence is man to woman, this film shows the wife as taking a dominant stance in getting rid of the husband and inflicting violence on him. She is also seen chasing him and he is running from her which is opposite to the gender views in society that women are the weaker partner and need protecting. Here the wife is standing up for herself and the man seems in need of protection.
QUESTION 2 - How does your film engage with audiences? You answered a bit about how it would relate to them, but how does it engage them? How have you grabbed their attention with things like narrative (storyline), characters, thriller conventions, editing and camera work, sound etc?
QUESTION 3 missing???
Question 4 - Good job learning to use YouTube MP3 converter and remembering to record this in your CCR. - I like that you matched the visuals with the txt for each type of technology you used - Pinterest - where are the photos and images you used to get inspiration from??? - No mention of cameras and sound equipment??
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- please make sure your answers are easy to read. I love the interesting graphics that add to each slide but the writing needs to be bigger and in a for different to the background to make it easy to read. Thanks!
only partially answered. Although you speak about the conventions you used, you didn't answer the second part of this which is whether your film challenged or used thriller conventions.
- A bit more depth is needed in talking about the love and romance aspect of what was represented. What messages are your film sending to the viewer about love and relationships? What does Liv and Dylan's relationship say to us about marriage and love?
- I feel like you could have commented on gender roles in this film too as it flips things around a bit. In a society where usually domestic violence is man to woman, this film shows the wife as taking a dominant stance in getting rid of the husband and inflicting violence on him. She is also seen chasing him and he is running from her which is opposite to the gender views in society that women are the weaker partner and need protecting. Here the wife is standing up for herself and the man seems in need of protection.
QUESTION 2
- How does your film engage with audiences? You answered a bit about how it would relate to them, but how does it engage them? How have you grabbed their attention with things like narrative (storyline), characters, thriller conventions, editing and camera work, sound etc?
QUESTION 3
missing???
Question 4
- Good job learning to use YouTube MP3 converter and remembering to record this in your CCR.
- I like that you matched the visuals with the txt for each type of technology you used
- Pinterest - where are the photos and images you used to get inspiration from???
- No mention of cameras and sound equipment??
Overall Score: 8/20